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| fatbird33 2008-08-24 ch 1,  | abuseindeed. abortion is murder |
| pencil stub people 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseI disagree completely, but this is a well-written haiku--simple and thought-provoking. |
| DeeFective 2008-07-16 ch 1, | abuseCan't say I really liked this very much. I think maybe it was the way you just attacked with your sentences. I didn't really find anything poetic about this and even though haikus are hard to write I think that you could've gone about this differently. But then again, my thoughts and opinions are different from yours so that could be why I didn't like this. But one thing I must say is that at least you had the guts to post this. Most people keep their opinions about taboo subjects under wraps but you posted it anyway. Bravo to you. |
| Seven Rose 2008-07-07 ch 1, | abuseI agree. I don't put out big long opinions of things. But I know what I think. If that makes any sense. |
| The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-07-01 ch 1, | abuseI TOTALLY agree! Do you mean the forum where you get the link that's in my profile? Great haiku by the way, I am terrible at those, I don't have the patience to count syllables, words I can count because the computer does it for me! ;p Write on! Pen.Dragon PS JESUS IS AWESOME! |
| TheWeirdoWriter 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseI totally agree with you. |
| snowdance-lyghtning 2008-06-05 ch 1, | abuseFIGHT FOR FREEBIE PRIZE! Sadly, this is a topic all my friends were disgussing because of the whole republican/democrat thing. Personally, I am pro-choice. Anywho, this is a very contrivercial poem, but a good one. It's quite hard to review haikus, but htere are no spelling/grammatical errors (YAY!). |
| Mercyette 2008-05-30 ch 1, | abuseVery nice Haiku, to put it simply. What I really wanted to comment on here was the fact that you had enough bravery to actually post how you feel about such a controversial issue on the internet. Not many people would do that for fear of being flamed. Congradulations and I hope you continue to voice your opinions. :) |
| emo konan girlX 2008-05-23 ch 1, | abuseso ture |
| PocoSnow15 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseI agree. Abortion is murder. More people should read this and get this through their heads. Awesome job! |
| Needa S 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseTrue! Awesome job. Write on and God Bless. |
| Elizabeth White 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseI love this haiku. This is a wonderful way to state the truth behind the murder of innocent life in a mother. Great job! |
| East-0f-Eden 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abusewow, great poem. I love how you're so blunt about it. you could make this into a sersis. |