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| perpetual questions 2008-04-23 ch 1,  | abuselovely imagery in these. my favourite is spring, but the others are also nice. however, i'm not sure 'wild' is really one syllable. -adrian |
| Franziska 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseI like particularly the first poem. The idea of flying is a good metaphor for the awakening nature. Ich weiß nicht, ob der englische Muttersprachler bei „spring“ die springen-Assoziation hat, aber für mich passt das gut zum Fliegen. |