|Reviews for For you|
| Chidaruma Kamisori 9/22/08 . chapter 1
This is sweet.
Like when you are so deeply involved with an idea that you can't see any options but one.
| Luna Turner 6/15/08 . chapter 1
I love the shorter poems. You have to be skilled to write one though, because you have to convey so much meaning.
Congratulations, you have skill. This poem is short and powerful, very well done.
| simpleplan13 5/19/08 . chapter 1
This is kinda cute and sweet, though nowhere near your best work. I like the ending a lot.
| Qzie 4/24/08 . chapter 1
Short and sweet. Can't help but smile after reading it. Chat later. -Qzie
| XxXKristie MarieXxX 4/24/08 . chapter 1
short and sweet _
| Bazooka Joy 4/23/08 . chapter 1
This is indeed very cute. I picture a little boy in elementary school trying to tell the little girl just how he feels.
| gg. lass 4/23/08 . chapter 1
yours until the wind changes,
| Daichiko 4/23/08 . chapter 1
This poem is very nice and touching. But i think 'a' in the first line should be switched to 'the' and maybe add commas?
So it would be:
The color is yellow,
yellow is the sun,
a sun I paint
... for you.
Other than that, it was nice! If you have time, can your R&R my poem? thanks! and nice job :D