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| Luna Turner 2008-06-15 ch 1,  | abuseI love the shorter poems. You have to be skilled to write one though, because you have to convey so much meaning. Congratulations, you have skill. This poem is short and powerful, very well done. ~Luna Turner |
| simpleplan13 2008-05-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is kinda cute and sweet, though nowhere near your best work. I like the ending a lot. |
| Qzie 2008-04-24 ch 1, anon. | abuseShort and sweet. ^^ Can't help but smile after reading it. Chat later. -Qzie |
| XxXKristie marieXxX 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseshort and sweet ^_^ |
| Bazooka Joy 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseThis is indeed very cute. I picture a little boy in elementary school trying to tell the little girl just how he feels. |
| losing gracie girl 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abusecute. yours until the wind changes, gg |
| EnigmaEnchantress 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseThis poem is very nice and touching. But i think 'a' in the first line should be switched to 'the' and maybe add commas? So it would be: For you. The color is yellow, yellow is the sun, a sun I paint ... for you. Other than that, it was nice! If you have time, can your R&R my poem? thanks! and nice job :D |