 RoseLife 2008-11-25 . chapter 1THIS IS HILARIOUS
i love the idea :D
awesome job
i personally half a biteathom year long ^__^
biting ppl is tons of fun!
well done |
 AbbeyEileen 2008-10-26 . chapter 1Ehh. Needs to be polished up a little more-- boring sentence structure, kind of repetitive. It went by really quickly, and I'd like to have seen it dragged out a little more... Good effort, though. It was cute. |
 VelvetyCheerio 2008-09-13 . chapter 1I laughed when Lily was like, "It is so not cool to go around biting people!" This is good. How do I vote? Where do I vote, more like it. Are reviews votes? Whatever. I love it. There was a sentence in here that didn't have a closed quotation. It was the same one that made me laugh.
I hope you win! You're awesome, good job. VelvetyCheerio. |
 Caecilia Bellz 2008-07-16 . chapter 1That was hilarious!! I probably would've never thought of that. The idea of the Biteathon is hilarious, I have to tell my friend about your story, she'll definitely love it. I love Samuel's rant about all the good one's being bitten. Very creative.
Her friend got bitten too. Haha. I love the moral of the story, very entertaining read!!
*for the Beer Run, at the Roadhouse-link in my profile*
~Caecilia |
 Twilight Starr 2008-07-09 . chapter 1It was absolutely hilarious! "Courtacy" should be "courtesy". I think instead of "defiantly" should be "definitely"."But your not a stranger," should be "But [you're] not a stranger,"
I like the alliteration with the names. Nice job on slipping the cookie in there. It was original. I enjoyed it. :D
Thanks for the reviews of "A Liar's Mission". I really appreciate it.
Have a lovely day.
~Twilight Starr~ |
 GrannyP 2008-06-17 . chapter 1What a hilarious challenge! The silliness of it was quite funny... a biteathon! I never would have thought of anything like that myself! |
 effervescent-sentiments 2008-05-24 . chapter 1Haha, I did this exact same challenge! It's on my FictionPress, if you'd care to review back.
Yours was too cute! I'm itching to bite someone now. Thanks a bunch! Haha.
Nice job!
Julia |
 heartfeltlove 2008-04-28 . chapter 1^.^
I liked it! I wanna join a biteathon!
In the beinging(sp) there was a typo you put "courtacy" it's supposed to be courtesy. :)
Good job! |