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RoseLife 2008-11-25 . chapter 1
THIS IS HILARIOUS
i love the idea :D
awesome job
i personally half a biteathom year long ^__^
biting ppl is tons of fun!
well done
AbbeyEileen 2008-10-26 . chapter 1
Ehh. Needs to be polished up a little more-- boring sentence structure, kind of repetitive. It went by really quickly, and I'd like to have seen it dragged out a little more... Good effort, though. It was cute.
VelvetyCheerio 2008-09-13 . chapter 1
I laughed when Lily was like, "It is so not cool to go around biting people!" This is good. How do I vote? Where do I vote, more like it. Are reviews votes? Whatever. I love it. There was a sentence in here that didn't have a closed quotation. It was the same one that made me laugh.

I hope you win! You're awesome, good job. VelvetyCheerio.
Caecilia Bellz 2008-07-16 . chapter 1
That was hilarious!! I probably would've never thought of that. The idea of the Biteathon is hilarious, I have to tell my friend about your story, she'll definitely love it. I love Samuel's rant about all the good one's being bitten. Very creative.
Her friend got bitten too. Haha. I love the moral of the story, very entertaining read!!
*for the Beer Run, at the Roadhouse-link in my profile*
~Caecilia
Twilight Starr 2008-07-09 . chapter 1
It was absolutely hilarious! "Courtacy" should be "courtesy". I think instead of "defiantly" should be "definitely"."But your not a stranger," should be "But [you're] not a stranger,"

I like the alliteration with the names. Nice job on slipping the cookie in there. It was original. I enjoyed it. :D

Thanks for the reviews of "A Liar's Mission". I really appreciate it.

Have a lovely day.

~Twilight Starr~
GrannyP 2008-06-17 . chapter 1
What a hilarious challenge! The silliness of it was quite funny... a biteathon! I never would have thought of anything like that myself!
effervescent-sentiments 2008-05-24 . chapter 1
Haha, I did this exact same challenge! It's on my FictionPress, if you'd care to review back.

Yours was too cute! I'm itching to bite someone now. Thanks a bunch! Haha.

Nice job!

Julia
heartfeltlove 2008-04-28 . chapter 1
^.^

I liked it! I wanna join a biteathon!

In the beinging(sp) there was a typo you put "courtacy" it's supposed to be courtesy. :)
Good job!
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