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| paris is burning 2008-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseyeesh, this was so abstract and so lovely. i loved the way you wrote ions, with the plus sign, so it doesn`t just mean the end of questions but is kind of relating to the chemicals, also... brilliant. usually i pick out a favourite line, but the whole thing just had excellent pacing, flowed very smoothly and i was captivated by each word. risks from the center pose... alright, that was probably one of my favourites. keep writing, will you? i truly love reading your stuff. |