Oh wow.
I've only read the first six paragraphs of your story but I'm already loving it!
I'm annoyed at all the plagiarists out there; forcing great writers to take down their work.
And I really,really,really wanted to read the rest of this story as well :(

XoRhymes

Really, really cute.
I must read everything you've ever written, or life will be sad.
-Jacquie

Aww , that was so sweet .
I totally wouldn't mind dating a guy like Devon =]

Wow. Really Good!:)

aw. devon is just too adorable :)

i just LOVE fluff ^_^

anyway, nice story. keep up the good work :D

i love nerds. cute story. keep it up

This is really cute! I love it.

My heart just about melted. That is so adorable.

i LOVE IT. although i would've loved it even better if you put on some more details afterwards. :) Get well soon!

This story is so cute !
I love how Devon is the nerd and stuff .
Very creative , I must say .

P.s I hope you're feeling better since you're in the hospital..
Get better soon .


saraelle

This was really cute! I liked that you had a cheerleader falling for the nerd. It was a little cliched, but I'm a hopeless romantic, so I'm all for the cliches. I read Bloodlust, but I don't want to review until you do your revamp of Forbidden Blood so I'll be able to properly critique your story!

Oh my god, how could you get such a brilliant idea?
It was very interesting, funny, cute, fluff, great and the list goes on.
I loved this a lot. Your writing brighten up my day, thanks!

aw, haha, see-through container =D
really cute story though, loved it
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oh how i want to see where this story goes but it says one shot. i really like it and wish you would continue but that is always up to you.

Aw that was perfect fluff. Love the idea of a cheerleader/nerd except the cheerleader's not a total bitch. Refreshing story, unique, fun, well-written!