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Reviews For: America's Next Top Model

molotovcocktailontherocks
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuseYou rock. :)
Katenheimer
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseWell, Tyra did do that whole thing where she went on her show in a bathing suit to show that she was proud of her 140 (or was it 160?) weight.

One thing--I would write out Prime Minister instead of just putting PM. Some people might need clarification. I needed to clarify TLC in my essay...it's just easier for the poem to flow if the reader doesn't have to stop and ask what something stands for, y'know?

Otherwise I like the poem and the message.
Undrahas
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseYour totally right. She needs to back off. I mean so what if a girl is fat or whatever? They can still be a role model. It doesn't much matter.
Bazooka Joy
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseAmerica will never get it. I can't wait for Japan to become the most influential country. At least that way we'll MAYBE want to be smart...?
Frog Lady
2008-04-23
ch 1, anon.
abuseYou know what? I totally agree.
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