Reviews for Punctuation to life

speakthetruth579 2008-05-31 ch 1,	abusemaybe im just slow, but what is the pattern? now im really curious. btw keep writing. all the stuff you write about...i read some of them everyday when i am down, and its like speaking to a person that understands you, without explaining yourself. basically, your writing keeps me off the ground, and inspires me. (can relate to 'rent situation)
Nemonus 2008-04-23 ch 1,	abuse"Punctuation to my life" is a fantastic concept, but it needs to be woven into the poem as a metaphor more. As is it's an abrupt, random ending.
perpetual questions 2008-04-23 ch 1,	abusenot true, i hope. 'dieing' should be 'dying'. feels more like an angsty, depressing blurb than a poem, honestly. -adrian