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| Yusuf 2008-06-23 ch 1,  | abuseNot all guys think this way. But given the majority, 90% do. How to tame them? Electric Shock collar around their necks. They get out of line... "BUZZ" But not the nice ones. ~Yusuf |
| Moose21 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseNow hold a second, I am dude and I dont think that way! but it is a cool poem, not all true but a nice poem |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseHey...we're not all like that. To me, this was quiet a funny poem! I liked how you formulated some of the questions as questions! your setup was also good! The Reverse Edge Blade |
| Peanuts Factory 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseWell maybe you aren't a man... I guess you are very empathetic to both genders. I like this poem; simple, but to the point. :) |
| Widdershin Wizard 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseThere must be a poor selection of men wherever it is you happen to live. Funny (in a sad way) poem, even if it does rely on such a horrid stereotype... |
| loveshouldnthurt 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseSo true!! This is so cute and it made me laugh. Great job!! |
| Undrahas 2008-04-23 ch 1, | abuseHa! If there was such a boy I would be climbing up and down the latter to find him! Unfournatlly there is only one such man, and he's my brother, and he's takin. Shoot. If he weren't my brother, and he was the same age as me maybe we could of dated...Alas he's my brother. Sucks that the 'good' men are taking, and the perverted horrid non-listening ones are left. Anyway, very humorus, and very true poem. Again I say: "Very very true." |