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| Sam J. Daniels 2008-04-23 ch 1,  | abuseWow! I loved it. I specially like it when it reads : This is Satan's chewing gum... the LACK OF CARING line sounds a lil off rhythm... nothing u can't fix, i loved it! Sam |