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| CrossMyHeart 2008-06-27 ch 1,  | abuseYAY! haha for some reason when i read this stories summary, i had this image of him pulling down his pants in the middle of the grocery store. Kinda glad that didn't happen. haha XxCrossMyHeartxX |
| found.eventually 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseI would've liked more details and chemistry between the both of them, and the story was A LITTLE RUSHED towards the end, but still. It's really, REALLY adorable, and a wonderfully light-hearted piece. AND HAHAHAHA. THE POETRY WAS GOOD. Entertaining, amusing, hilarious. Loved it, darlin! :) |
| Lily Llynn 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseLOL I don't mind the poetry. It was quite entertaining. (: Poetry kinda confuses me and such sometimes, and I also don't like it when people try too hard to be good poets (but really really really suck). Cute, fluffy, but of course, I love it. (: I don't mind (correction: I adore) fluff when it's written well, and this is. I'm glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. (: |
| jinx89 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseAw, this was a cute one shot. Nice job! Oh, and something totally creepy...my name is Liz and my best friend's name is Katie too! Crazy Stuff! Once again, nice job! |
| SparklingStar25 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseThis is so cute! But I felt the ending was a bit too rushed.. you did say you were sleepy so anyway.. But as I said earlier..the entire story was really cute! Hope to see more from you.. PS.Are you a South Indian:?Your name seems so..if you dont mind me asking that is |
| Pinkamoo 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseThere are all kinds of goths. Some of them stare at you like they want to attack you - some of them are bubbly. Cute! |
| Junie-Jun 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abusecute! |
| xxxyxxx 2008-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOVE IT!! Cute, adorable and funny.. |
| d666lisa 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseThe storyline was good and had a lot of potential but I agree with a previous reviewer that it seemed extremely rushed. Your main character came across as stupid and unlikeable and Darien's character wasn't developed enough. But the cliched\cute storyline almost made up for all these errors. |
| x3life 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseaw this was so cute!! =) i loved the corney poemss |
| GrannyP 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseHaha! That was really cute! Sorry, you probably hear the word cute all the time in your reviews (I haven't checked, so I don't know for sure), but I HAD to say it. The poems Darien wrote were adorable! I would love it if someone wrote me a poem. Aw... now I'm going to get all depressed. Hehe, not really. Nice job with this "cute" story! |
| Oooh.Look.A Cat 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseohmygosh that is the cutest from the pink-hating line to the 'your mine' ooh wow. an accidental rhyme. haha a very cute stories and...asking if they're a guy?? that's funny i woulda immediately thought they woulda been buying it for someone else but then again, i'd probably be more embarrassed at seeing him in the tampon aisle than he would be i say this again - i loved it =] izzie |
| Sapheneia 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseThis is an awesome story! poetry and all... I also love the reference to the twilight series! |
| writingxonxwalls 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseAww- that was so cute, and adorable... I loved it. *favs* It makes me want to jump out and go hug those skaters down the street, hahaha (: |
| artistic dreamer 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abusehaha, this is funny! i love the poems, as cheesy and horribly rhymed as it is :D hahaha, but this is so cute! hoping to see more one shots in the future!! hahah |