Nice story...A little confusing but good...So...Um...HOPE U CAN UPDATE SOON;)

AH! This is amazing! 'ehem' Your much appreciated reviews showed that you were a good writer but I confess I didn't expect something like this. It was well worth the shock. Please update soon. It has a very dignified writing style and fits the general setting (mafias and all) and the the various interludes with the foreshadowing and stuff is all enough to offer you a hefty sum of money to finish this. Or a plate of curry. Or some fish. Anyways. Continue.

Good chapter, I'm glad that she aged ten years before the end of the chapter.

~SirScott

ah, plot bunnies! mine are (monty python) killer rabbits, just because they're cooler. but i've loaded them with dynamite and they still get in!

so far i've been reviewing a lot of mob stories its seems...weird... but i can't wait to see how this turns out. evilly sincere

It's an interesting start. It could shape into a great story and I hope the plotbunnies don't make your brain explode.

~SirScott

This looks, so far, like it's going to be good!