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PoisndNarcissus
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuse"my actions will not become
the impurities my thoughts are
my thoughts are impulsive
my actions cannot be"

I really liked the way you wrote this part. I dunno why, it just really spoke to me.
Random-Idiocity
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuse''Whatever I can think of I can't write'' that seems to be the truth for when we struggle with writers block. You did a really good job on this piece, my thoughts keep me up too. Keep it Up!
schizophrenic.iv-personalit...
2008-04-24
ch 1, anon.
abusethe randomness of the topics end up flowing together even if they are random. i like it. i want to see the page if you happen to have it with you.
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