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fuzzysquawk 2008-05-12 ch 8,	abuseMiranda (chp.7)seems like a really bch id ont like her.. she reminds me of a couple girls who r in my school... i dont like them eitehr :) In chapter 8, Rebecca is a typical fan.. with the autographs and with the staring. You showed that really wel.. I wonder what the moms going to be like... i hope not a bch like the ex- gf! Anyway nice updates! update soon! :)
miiniie 2008-05-12 ch 8,	abuseOoh! And enter stage left Josef's mom! I was expecting Miranda, didn't expect his mom at all! LMAO And she lost her top as well!
GrannyP 2008-05-11 ch 8,	abuseUh oh. Didn't expect to see mom showing up! Whoa, yeah that threw me off. I thought maybe the crazy ex or something, but not mom. Holy moly, this should get interesting. No prob with no quick updates. I haven't written ahead in ages. Well, since Pie anyway. Hah. Okay, now that I have read this lovely chapter, I must go lie back down and nurse this sore throat and upset stomach... ugh, what a terrible weekend.
CaFFy 2008-05-11 ch 8,	abuseMajor flimsy bikini. xD
Morsh Mana 2008-05-11 ch 8,	abuseOh wow. Great description of the house. It sounds so beautiful. I love Sarah...hahahaha and look who shows up during a nice and akward moment...MAURA! Good Chapter, keep writing.
xbrunnettex0 2008-05-11 ch 8,	abuseomgg id die of embarissment! update soon
WriterGurl123 2008-05-11 ch 8,	abuseUh-Oh! Calling mom is sinking really low. UGH!
Delu 2008-05-11 ch 8,	abuse-squeel- That was ADORABLE. Honestly, it was. -nod- But I seriously cannot wait to see what happens next chapter. With the description you've given of the mom, I do believe it'll be very interesting... -wink- Can't wait for more, - Delu
Onia Black 2008-05-11 ch 8,	abuseOMGOSH! i cannot believe his mom caugh them. oh boy! what's she doing there? YIKES! Wow that was a really good chapter they were so cute together too wow. really good chapter. WOW. seriously. my mouth is inbetween a =O and a =D i'm squeaking. you better update soon. that was such a good chapeter. for real. =] keep up the good work
casey-kent 2008-05-11 ch 7,	abuseI love this story!! It's very... interesting. I can't wait for the next chapters! Keep writing! ~Casey
EvilAngelKitty 2008-05-10 ch 7,	abuseThis story is really good. I just read chapters 1-7. They were awesome. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Delu 2008-05-10 ch 7,	abuseFirstly, no, I don't imagine anyone in particular when I read of Josef. Secondly, I feel sorry for poor John Paul, but he really ought to have known in the first place. Thirdly, Joranda? Yeah, made me gag, too. Can't wait for another chap! - Delu
KatieTheWriter 2008-05-10 ch 7,	abuseVery clever chapter, and I must say, I have a feeling I know what's going to happen in the next chapter or two. Miranda will show up in LA, am I right? Well, I can't wait for another chapter. You described the bitchiness of Miranda quite well. I love how I can see the scenes in my mind. Oh, and Rebecca is kind of annoying. I'd be like, get off my man, weirdo fanatic! LOL. Just kidding. Oh and growing bangs out is a pain in the neck. Mine are taking forever! Sigh. I should have listened to my boyfriend when he said I shouldn't cut them. He was right! So it's bobby pins and head bands for now. Oh and in my mind, Josef looks like Christian Bale in Little Women! I love that movie. Or, maybe he looks like Milo Ventimiglia! But I totally picture more of a young Christian Bale, with the hair a little long like that. Please tell me who you imagine! I have to know or I will go crazy. Maybe not, but still. Tell me if I'm even remotely close! Katie
WriterGurl123 2008-05-09 ch 7,	abuseMiranda is definitely a stalker who needs to get a life. I wonder how her and Olivia are going to take to each other. Post More Soon!
Morsh Mana 2008-05-09 ch 7,	abuseThis chapter was great! Joranda bleh! I want to vomit. Miranda seems like the villain everyone loves to hate. So far so good, Katie.

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