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| urjellingcauseimevil 2008-05-10 ch 2,  | abuseim grounded so i cant get caught on the computer so ill make this quick LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE GUSHGUSHGUSHGUSHGUSH |
| Meokat 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI know it's strange, reviewing my own story, but this is a response to an anonymous review, which, as you probably know, I can't really respond to. Every human has a right clavicle and a left clavicle. Opposite clavicle, to me, means that he took his hand and placed it on the clavicle on the opposite side of his body. (Left on right or right on left) I'm not sure if that really makes sense to other people. Hopefully it does, and hopefully it clarified things a bit. Thanks |
| stargazerlost 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseAww, poor Gare and poor Julie. haha As sweet as Caleb is, I can't help but hope that Gare and Julie end up as a couple. Ah well, I'm just a total sucker for best-friends-being-something-more. Ooh, I can't wait to see what happens next, though I have a theory about who the person in the car is. |
| xbluxmoonx 2008-05-09 ch 2, | abusehaha cute so fare. hope ya update soon. =] |
| anono 2008-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abusewhat the hell does opposite clavicle even mean? i mean, i'm taking anatomy right now and i still don't get where "opposite" comes from. |
| Silenced Soul And Alter Ego 2008-05-09 ch 2, | abuseIt's cool. And cute (for some reason I can't manage to prove). -eyeroll- How can Joules not see that Gare is practically inlove with her? -clicks tongue- And I'm pretty sure that the driver in the blue car is Caleb (awesome, I have a character named Caleb in my story too). The pick-up lines, by the way, were hilarious and very original. Love 'em. Signing out, Silence |
| Da Vinci at Work 2008-05-09 ch 2, | abuseIt's so spontaneous that it's beautiful. |
| Random_Person 2008-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abusegood story. It was funny. if only more guys were like Caleb or Gare Bear. |
| zombrea 2008-05-06 ch 1, | abuseI find this absolutely adorable. :) |
| thoughtsofwisdom 2008-05-05 ch 1, | abuseDude tell me this isn't a one shot cause that was really good. and i so wanna know what happens next. if anything happens next. please tell me there is more and if not make some more up on my behalf. pweaze |
| Pink and Black Sharpies 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abusereally cute and funny. it wasn't just a one shot though? Also the first paragraph made me believe the Julie was a boy and it didn't quite clear up for me until the end. It might be just me, but other than that, it is a great story!! |
| YellowBanana 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseo it seems interesting, and caleb seems hot :D update soon! |
| Luminaerie 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseAwesomeness. Really funny and I can't exactly tell where this is going - which is good. I guess. O_o Right. Love the dialog and the pick-up lines. Update soon! PS. My favorite character so far is Caleb. Julie seems so...familiar at the moment. ;] |
| A Little Bitter 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseNow that was made of awesome. Seriously, i couldn't help but giggle to myself. |
| noodless 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abusegreat start - sadly i know a few of those nerdy pick-up lines ... ... :S |