I'm guessing that the driver of the blue car is the one and only


The pick-up lines from the first chapter made me smile. I need to share them with my friends.

Fingers crossed for an update,
Wishing you the best,
-Auphora

Hey.. the story seems nice.. you write pretty well..
any hopes of an update? :)

wow... this story made my laugh so hard. would i love to be julie? YES! gare seems so interesting to hang out with. hahaha.

Oh~ I really like it

Damn. Only 2 chapters and I like this. A lot.

Yep. Hilarious. I have to go but try and update please. The pickup lines made me crack up. Did you think of them yourself? Better yet, have you ever used any of them yourself..? ;)

Because I know and value the importance of happy socks, I decided to review! The characters so far seem likeable and real and the camaraderie between Gareth and Julie is very apparent. I'm assuming that this will, of course, be a best friend is madly in love and protective of the girl best friend who sees past all his ** cliche. Fortunately, I absolutely adore cliches and find them to be super cute! I also like the love rival. The smart pick up lines really made me laugh, cause I'm a dork like that. I can't wait to see how Julie interacts with Caleb now that Gareth can't interrupt.

Hope to see you update soon!

gosh! haven't read a good story in a while! tres bien! update soon! :D

I like this! You should continue. Update soon!!

That was hilarious! I seriously love your story. Gare and Julie are suprisingly believable characters and I congratulate you for being able to pull off First person P.O.V so well. I actually envy you. ;-) I also *think* I know why Gare is acting the way he is. (Awesome orginal name by the way.) I love Julie's sarcastic wit and really how orginal this is. Hitting on a random someone in mall. Who wouldn't thunk it would make such a great story?

The only complaint I have is...why haven't you updated? You got me hooked and then just left me hanging with Chapter 2. Usually I can't conjure the sympathy for orginal characters on here but I really felt for Julie. And then just, bam. Waiting for the conclusion. So, update, please? *Trys and fails to pull off pitiful puppy-dog eyes*

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter, Azriel

I love it!

I really enjoy how this is turning out. I rather hope that you can update sometime, but seeing as this story hasn't been updated for a while, I doubt it... but I can hope! ;p
muchlove!
can't wait for an update!
Pyrgus!

Intruiging...

oh my goodness! This story is blody brillant! Muy fantastico!
Update soon! Cant wait to find out what happens!

AH! WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME?! Okay, I demand you tell me who I have to root for! *stomps feet* Is it Caleb or Gare? Hmm?

UPDATE SOON!

-dances.with.sunflowers.

YOU ARE THE SHIZNIT. OH YES. Pick up lines are my life and I thoroughly enjoy this with a supremely ridiculous amount of enthusiasm.

FOR SERIOUS.

lol And I'm off to the next chapter~!

-dances.with.sunflowers.