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| dances.with.sunflowers. 2008-09-27 ch 2,  | abuseAH! WHY MUST YOU TORTURE ME?! Okay, I demand you tell me who I have to root for! *stomps feet* Is it Caleb or Gare? Hmm? UPDATE SOON! -dances.with.sunflowers. |
| dances.with.sunflowers. 2008-09-27 ch 1, | abuseYOU ARE THE SHIZNIT. OH YES. Pick up lines are my life and I thoroughly enjoy this with a supremely ridiculous amount of enthusiasm. FOR SERIOUS. lol And I'm off to the next chapter~! -dances.with.sunflowers. |
| danimarie-xx 2008-08-31 ch 2, | abuseOnly two chapters and I can tell this is going to be one of my favorites. I love it so far, and looking forward to the next update. :] |
| SecretFeelings 2008-06-24 ch 2, | abuselove it, I liked that Shock. Fury. Roar. thing, made me laugh for a while. ^_^ |
| Jaeiyola 2008-06-22 ch 2, | abuseAh, let me guess; it's Caleb to the rescue. Gare and Julie, both sounds like amusing friends to ...befriend. And Caleb, he's just blowing my mind at his amazing-ness. ;D Can't wait for your next chapter. |
| steviegiesgurl08 2008-06-21 ch 2, | abuseplz update soon.. cnt wait.. -s- |
| FadeToBlack 2008-06-18 ch 2, | abuseThis totally lives up to the name of Category. So uncliched. I can't wait to read the next update. Soon would be extraordinary. F2B |
| Aams 2008-06-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is a really cute story! I was just looking around for something to read and inspire me to write (I've been having some extreme writers block lately) and this did the trick! I can't help but root for Gare just because I think jealousy is adorable. (Plus if Caleb is anything like the Caleb I know he doesn't need anymore girls -_-) |
| aurora borealis 2008-05-15 ch 2, | abuseAw. This story was cute. Although I would've liked to know why Julie doesn't get Valentines... It would be an interesting tale. Does Gare scare them all away? Hm. Can't wait to read more! |
| numberonefan 2008-05-13 ch 2, anon. | abuseUPDATE PLEASE! I love this story! It's very unique and it's hilarious! I especially loved the educational pick up lines! Haha!! |
| urjellingcauseimevil 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseim grounded so i cant get caught on the computer so ill make this quick LOVELOVELOVELOVELOVE GUSHGUSHGUSHGUSHGUSH |
| Meokat 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseI know it's strange, reviewing my own story, but this is a response to an anonymous review, which, as you probably know, I can't really respond to. Every human has a right clavicle and a left clavicle. Opposite clavicle, to me, means that he took his hand and placed it on the clavicle on the opposite side of his body. (Left on right or right on left) I'm not sure if that really makes sense to other people. Hopefully it does, and hopefully it clarified things a bit. Thanks |
| stargazerlost 2008-05-10 ch 2, | abuseAww, poor Gare and poor Julie. haha As sweet as Caleb is, I can't help but hope that Gare and Julie end up as a couple. Ah well, I'm just a total sucker for best-friends-being-something-more. Ooh, I can't wait to see what happens next, though I have a theory about who the person in the car is. |
| xbluxmoonx 2008-05-09 ch 2, | abusehaha cute so fare. hope ya update soon. =] |
| anono 2008-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abusewhat the hell does opposite clavicle even mean? i mean, i'm taking anatomy right now and i still don't get where "opposite" comes from. |