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Yusuf
2008-06-23
ch 1,
abuseI am not one to argue with religuos beliefs, but I agree with you.

Nicely Said

~Yusuf
Katenheimer
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseFirstly: Simon and Garfunkel! YAY!

Boy, you sure take your readers on a journey, lol. In one poem you're talking about filling Churches and Cathedrals and the next you're practically condemning people for filling said Churches. I know there are a lot of inconsistencies within religions, but I think faith is not only believing in a higher power, but seeing the human faults in organized religion as just that: human. The relationship you need to focus on the most is the one between you and God, not you and the Church.
fleur de l'est
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseBy this you just keep on rejecting the salvation that was at one point offered to you through that sign. Yes that silly, meaningless sign. I hope you are a happy Atheist - only you would know.
AlphaNess
2008-04-25
ch 1,
abuseSalvation is for all, should you accept it. Therefore your poem fails. Salvation is handed out for you, you just need to take it.

And obviously your taking the bible to litereally. Don't take offence to this, but please don't write another poem untill you can create a good argmunet against christianity.
Undrahas
2008-04-24
ch 1,
abuseCan't say its one of my favorites. Can't even say that a little offense was taken.

I'm a Christian, so you'll just have to bear with me here.

Don't get me wrong,. It was good. Thats bout all I can say.
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