This is [i]excellent[/i], Ms. Presence. I can't believe how well written this is...it describes human frailty, the decay of the dignity of man through "his lower self" (as St. Francis de Sales would say), and salvation.

Fave'D.

Well done for creating a poem about this aspect of life. I'm really impressed, especially as a christian and having felt exactly as you describe so well. Brilliant.