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| downbythebeardedbarley000 2008-07-19 ch 9,  | abuseI knew something was wrong with Jonah. But I think its good that Addie still staysw with him. When's the next chapter going to be up? |
| downbythebeardedbarley000 2008-07-13 ch 8, | abuseOKay, you can't leave us hanging there! I need more :] Matt sounds hot even though he's an ass. Jonah should have "mashed his face into ground beef" when he had the chance. Update soon. I'll be waiting |
| downbythebeardedbarley000 2008-07-12 ch 7, | abuseI really like this. A lot. |
| nerdz 2008-06-01 ch 5, | abuseSimply amazing. Really makes you think and is a breath of fresh air from other story lines. |
| TheQueenOfMediocrity 2008-05-16 ch 2, | abusecool! I like the prose and the characterization a lot. |
| TheQueenOfMediocrity 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseinteresting. I like the puppet poem. |
| amnesiac-vampire 2008-05-12 ch 3, | abusePretty cool story so far, keep up the great work! |
| my name is grace. 2008-05-06 ch 3, | abuseThis is so much different then everything I've read lately. It's nice that you put something in telling us about Jonah's past, how he became this way. Can't wait to read more... -Grace |
| Eduper 2008-05-06 ch 3, | abuseHope you update the story soon |
| my name is grace. 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abuseLove this, Love this. I can already tell it's going to be great. Jonah seems really interesting, and I can't wait to learn more about him. I really can't wait. I love your writing. -Grace |
| DuchessYappingDog 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abuseMental disorder? Is Jonah bipolar? |
| LoveOutLoud 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseThis was short and kept me wanted more. I'm extremely interested in learning more about Jonah Everett and getting further into the mind of your 'fallen' narrator. |
| amnesiac-vampire 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseSounds interesting, I hope you update soon. |