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| DorkMaster 2008-05-10 ch 1, | abuseSimple, yet good. For the record, I'm pro-choice too, but there are circumstances where it really bothers me. Like you're in your twenties and your fooling around and you get knocked up and don't want the kid (bad grammar, sorry). |
| Imagined Insanity 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseinteresting, but i think it's in the wrong category? not a haiku... |
| Tabi Berkey 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abusea fascinating look at a life where you don't get to choose. sad and very alarming |
| 1Wanderer 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseOh... I like. Very nice. |
| Glowing Aura 2008-04-24 ch 1, | abuseWow. I've no words for this. It's haunting, but I think that's what makes this poem work. I agree with the message 100%, by the way. Not only was Daddy a rapist, but Mommy had to carry a child she never wanted. So sad. |