another great piece :) I love it! Like I mentioned in my other review, you are gifted :DD

Haha! Sweet! He fainted!
Gees, what a kiss that would have been!

Yay, you upbeat again. My brother (Not my twin but my younger,) says hi. and he likes you writing style.
WBW

You might want to look over for the instance of "Patience" instead of "Perfection." :)

Bravo!

The bit of the story was the selling point for me =] I loved the humour you injected at the end, with Jacob fainting (nice to see that it's not always the woman who does).

Good job!

BR

Wonderful, wonderful story; and you write so well! Admittedly, the plot isn't anything to write home about, but you've executed it brilliantly. I just love how everyhting just comes together in the end, your writing style, the name Perfection, and especially the last three lines :)