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| trace 2008-04-25 ch 1, anon. | abusei rlly like the idea, but it needs to be//majorly polished. how I know when to do and when to not. --grammatically awful among other mistakes within the poem. what gets me most is that it isnt a poem..just a few sentences split into prose. theres no need to force ideas into poetry. it is much too deliberate of an attempt and comes out as...well. i dont want to flame. but it doesn come out well, lets just say... |