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| Lady Fingers 2008-09-15 ch 1,  | abuseas intense as your writers block may seem, this is utterly wonderful and i wish i could write like this when i have writers block. i just sit on my floor in a tangled mess trying so hard to say something i'm not even feeling but this contains more feeling than you'd ever think |
| Moon's Poetess 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseHow very... strange. I like the references to the mountains and moors, although were you thinking of "candy coated mountains" or did you really mean "candy coded"? Somehow I wish the lines were connected, though... they all just seem to be completely unconnected thoughts thrown together in a bowl and mixed with some pretty words. *shrugs* I suppose it's just not my kind of poetry and I don't get it, hehe, but I enjoyed reading it anyway =) Moon's Poetess |