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| misery sister 2008-05-05 ch 1,  | abuse1. Space out all your paragrahps. Long paragraphs and big blocks of text are so daunting to readers. You have action here, so you need to space them out for us to process what's happening. 2. Space out all the dialogue. It's hard to know who's saying what if all your dialogue is in one paragraph. 3. all numbers from 0-100 are spelled out. I think you know what i'm referring to. goodluck. |
| Eilinora 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abuseHaha. Boring, stupid, lame, cliched. This doesn't even deserve a proper flame. -yawn- |
| mouringrose 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseOh! It's really cool, update soon! I love it! |