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Reviews For: The Battle

sugaplumprincess 2008-04-27 ch 1,	abusecute little story! i like the over-the-top semi-serious tone of describing such an epic battle between rubber ducky and stick, it makes it funnier. The author's note though, was a bit long for such a short story and kind of took attention away from the actual piece. Also, at the end I wasn't sure if the boy was hit, or the duck which left me a bit confused.
Esther Jade 2008-04-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is quite sweet. It sounded almost like how a mother would narrate the story. The last sentence jarred a little bit for me. I would consider ending it with Bobby celebrating with the rubber ducky... But that's just my opinion.
MegTheStrange 2008-04-26 ch 1,	abuseCute story! I didn't expect the rubber duck lol. I liked it
Zonne 2008-04-25 ch 1,	abuseThat is weird and it did make me lol. Thanks for the smile.
The.Wizard.Pen.Dragon 2008-04-25 ch 1,	abuseThat was pretty good, but towards to end it became obvious. But surprises are HARD, so don't kill yourself over it! Also, you repeted the first sentence, that's been happening to a lot of people lately for some reason you should be able to fit it no problem. So, GOOD JOB! Write on! Pen.Dragon PS: I'm adding this to my C2 right now!