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Reviews For: Indian Summer

indigo-blue
2008-04-28
ch 2,
abuseCool!
I really like this! Keep going.
The foreword is especially amazing. Keep it up.

~Indy *
James Hiwatari
2008-04-28
ch 2,
abuseHum... yeah, it is a bit slow. I am curious for why they are moving like that, but I have the feeling that I will find at some point, so I'm not gonna ask that...

And how did the guy managed to put a cat in a car and let it sleep in there?
I wish my cat could fit in a car... she almost caused an accident the last time she did...

James
James Hiwatari
2008-04-25
ch 1,
abuseThe beggining is promising. I would like to see how it develops.

I particularly liked the the two last senteces. I think they fit well with the idea of a "foreword". It keeps people interested in the sequence.

Looking foward to read the rest,

James
Wren Silver
2008-04-25
ch 1,
abuseI don't have much to say yet, seeing as it hasn't really started. I like the idea; it could make a good story.
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