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| indigo-blue 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abuseCool! I really like this! Keep going. The foreword is especially amazing. Keep it up. ~Indy * |
| James Hiwatari 2008-04-28 ch 2, | abuseHum... yeah, it is a bit slow. I am curious for why they are moving like that, but I have the feeling that I will find at some point, so I'm not gonna ask that... And how did the guy managed to put a cat in a car and let it sleep in there? I wish my cat could fit in a car... she almost caused an accident the last time she did... James |
| James Hiwatari 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseThe beggining is promising. I would like to see how it develops. I particularly liked the the two last senteces. I think they fit well with the idea of a "foreword". It keeps people interested in the sequence. Looking foward to read the rest, James |
| Wren Silver 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseI don't have much to say yet, seeing as it hasn't really started. I like the idea; it could make a good story. |