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| McKinley Cooper 2008-04-28 ch 1,  | abuseI think I know how to describe it now--this gift you have. But I'm supposed to talk about the poem, yes the poem. This one and others are that imaginary sound you hear behind you in an empty parking garage, so you shove your car key between your fingers to use as a weapon like they taught you on Oprah(but I don't watch that show). No. That's not it at all. This is my line, so don't use it (not that you would-what was I thinking...you cause this inner dialogue to come to the forefront of my brain...I'm sorry). It is "sad, violent beauty" and I use none of those words lightly. |
| perpetual questions 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abusei don't care if it's rubbish or not; it's exactly the kind of thing i love, especially the darkness slipping off my eyelashes. wonderful. hey, "hello darkness, my old friend" is also a line from the song 'the sounds of silence' by simon & garfunkle. -adrian |
| Scarlett Wynter 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseit's definitely not rubbish! I really think this is great. the imagery is awesome and the flow is pretty nice. keep writing :) |
| In the Rye 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abusehmn. i don't think its worthless. it actually has a decent message and the writing was pretty good. |
| Tetelestai 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseThis was beautiful in an ugly way. Or ugly in a beautiful way? Anyway, it was very 'wow'. :) Your way with words creates amazing imagery... I think I got a little depressed after reading this haha. I'd like to see you try to write a happy one-shot someday. :) Good job! |