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| d666lisa 2008-07-05 ch 1, | abuseI loved the idea behind this story and I think it had great potential. However Tessa is so oblivious and stupid it is almost impossible to identify with her and you never told us enough about Emmett to make the "romance" believable. However it was a cute story :) |
| emerald 2008-05-09 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey, belated Happy Birthday! And that was cute:). |
| writingxonxwalls 2008-05-08 ch 1, | abuseAww- that was an awesome idea!! Youtube... haha so clever! |
| found.eventually 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseOoh. I'm 3 days early, but happy birthday in advance! :) Anyway, I thought the entire idea was (somewhat) original, and the story was cute. I'd never be able to produce something like that in one and a half hour, so really, kudos to you darling! Wonderful job, you! I'm tempted to search for a certain him on youtube now. LOOK WHAT YOU'VE DONE. HAHAH. |
| Lily Llynn 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseI wish we could've seen more of her being attracted to Emmett simply because instead of the whole song/guy thing. What if her "soulmate" had a idiotic personality? Anyway. (: Cute, Fluffy, Cliche, all elements I love when the oneshot is well-written, and this is (except for what I said before, but that's okay). I'm glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2! (: |
| AiAi The All Powerful 2008-05-02 ch 1, | abuseCute! It made me grin widely. |
| x3life 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseaww this was cute!! =) |
| starlit x sky 2008-05-01 ch 1, | abuseAww this is really cute! The idea of her finding her soulmate on youtube is really good, very original. =] Oh, and by the way, happy early birthday! |
| artistic dreamer 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseaw...this is so cute! i love the idea of finding your soulmate, mostly because i believe that everyby is destined to be with someone and somehow by fate, your soulmate and you will eventually meet. i love this! it's so cool how they found each other through youtube. though i'm too scared of stalkers and the internet to ever do that, i can't wait til i find my soulmate! i love this oneshot! keep writing! and happy birthday just in case i forget to wish you happy birthday on that day since i have ap exams :) bye for now! rachel |
| Kohlomere 2008-04-30 ch 1, | abuseHappy birthday! That was bizzare but cute! Good work, E. |
| J-Ling Lime 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseHappy early birthday!! Great story. Haha, finding soulmates on youtube. I think i'm going to try that! Haha, jk. ~Cheerio!~ P.S. Check out my story! |
| Pinkamoo 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseOh thankyou :p I was looking for those cartoons everywhere! Like the story - I'd DIE if that happened to me, and be all, "Uhm, nice song! I gotta go now! BYE!" |
| Jazz 2008-04-27 ch 1, anon. | abusehahahaha thats adorable :) that was such a nice little story that made me smile. good work! i seriously love your one shots the best! now if only we all had an emmet.. |
| A Handful of Rain xx 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusei love this! it's so cute. |
| rachely 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abusekinda corny but cute :) |