Me likey. I love your tactic for getting people to read this. It's so mysterious, you just have to read it! It's like, for the twent seconds you are sitting there, deciding weather or not to read it, something is hastily eating away at you! It's CRAZY! YOU , MY FRIEND ARE A GENIUS!

The ending was excellent. I like that this is such a related piece, makes it more meaningful for the reader. Keep it Up!