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Reviews For: Asphyxiation

WritesWithPoisonInkAndBlood
2008-07-03
ch 1,
abuseO, I like the hidden darkness between the lines here, good poem xD
Mourning Sickness
2008-07-02
ch 1,
abuseVery well-written.
PoisndNarcissus
2008-06-30
ch 1,
abuseI love Haikus because it gives the writer a chance to do something powerful and strong with minimal words. Very nice, I really enjoyed it.
Breaks-like-crystal
2008-06-01
ch 1,
abuseI really like it, last line being my favourite
kloun doll
2008-05-28
ch 1,
abuseit reminds me of when I'm angry and I can't breathe..
BlackestOpal
2008-05-09
ch 1,
abuseThis haiku made me lose my breath. :D
Amazing.
silentscreamer07
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseMan..you are catching up with me!! This is so not cool..I do really need to write something..just for the sake of writing it! *smiles*

I love your haikus though! And that is one big word! "Asphyxiation" I don't think i've ever heard it before..or heard it a lot anyway. But I liked this one! (go figure..) :P lol

These poems are so simple..but I'm starting to like them the more and more you write them. Keep it up!
PocoSnow15
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseSeven words and there was so much strength in this I couldn't even believe it. Awesome job, this was so good.
creepy kiss on tuesday
2008-04-25
ch 1,
abuseI literally forgot to breath once when I was swimming...sorry you probably didn't need to know that.

Lovely haiku dear.
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