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| WritesWithPoisonInkAndBlood 2008-07-03 ch 1,  | abuseO, I like the hidden darkness between the lines here, good poem xD |
| Mourning Sickness 2008-07-02 ch 1, | abuseVery well-written. |
| PoisndNarcissus 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseI love Haikus because it gives the writer a chance to do something powerful and strong with minimal words. Very nice, I really enjoyed it. |
| Breaks-like-crystal 2008-06-01 ch 1, | abuseI really like it, last line being my favourite |
| kloun doll 2008-05-28 ch 1, | abuseit reminds me of when I'm angry and I can't breathe.. |
| BlackestOpal 2008-05-09 ch 1, | abuseThis haiku made me lose my breath. :D Amazing. |
| silentscreamer07 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuseMan..you are catching up with me!! This is so not cool..I do really need to write something..just for the sake of writing it! *smiles* I love your haikus though! And that is one big word! "Asphyxiation" I don't think i've ever heard it before..or heard it a lot anyway. But I liked this one! (go figure..) :P lol These poems are so simple..but I'm starting to like them the more and more you write them. Keep it up! |
| PocoSnow15 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseSeven words and there was so much strength in this I couldn't even believe it. Awesome job, this was so good. |
| creepy kiss on tuesday 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseI literally forgot to breath once when I was swimming...sorry you probably didn't need to know that. Lovely haiku dear. |