|Reviews for Asphyxiation|
| with eyes looking up 7/14/09 . chapter 1
keep them wondering. definite fave.
| TheBeautyOfTheGrave 7/3/08 . chapter 1
O, I like the hidden darkness between the lines here, good poem xD
| Mourning Sickness 7/2/08 . chapter 1
| PoisndNarcissus 6/30/08 . chapter 1
I love Haikus because it gives the writer a chance to do something powerful and strong with minimal words. Very nice, I really enjoyed it.
| i-want-2-delete-my-account 6/1/08 . chapter 1
I really like it, last line being my favourite
| kloun mannequin 5/28/08 . chapter 1
it reminds me of when I'm angry and I can't breathe..
| BlackestOpal 5/9/08 . chapter 1
This haiku made me lose my breath. :D
| silentscreamer07 4/29/08 . chapter 1
Man..you are catching up with me! This is so not cool..I do really need to write something..just for the sake of writing it! *smiles*
I love your haikus though! And that is one big word! "Asphyxiation" I don't think i've ever heard it before..or heard it a lot anyway. But I liked this one! (go figure..) :P lol
These poems are so simple..but I'm starting to like them the more and more you write them. Keep it up!
| PocoSnow15 4/27/08 . chapter 1
Seven words and there was so much strength in this I couldn't even believe it. Awesome job, this was so good.
| creepy kiss on tuesday 4/25/08 . chapter 1
I literally forgot to breath once when I was swimming...sorry you probably didn't need to know that.
Lovely haiku dear.