keep them wondering. definite fave.

O, I like the hidden darkness between the lines here, good poem xD

Very well-written.

I love Haikus because it gives the writer a chance to do something powerful and strong with minimal words. Very nice, I really enjoyed it.

I really like it, last line being my favourite

it reminds me of when I'm angry and I can't breathe..

This haiku made me lose my breath. :D

Amazing.

Man..you are catching up with me! This is so not cool..I do really need to write something..just for the sake of writing it! *smiles*

I love your haikus though! And that is one big word! "Asphyxiation" I don't think i've ever heard it before..or heard it a lot anyway. But I liked this one! (go figure..) :P lol

These poems are so simple..but I'm starting to like them the more and more you write them. Keep it up!

Seven words and there was so much strength in this I couldn't even believe it. Awesome job, this was so good.

I literally forgot to breath once when I was swimming...sorry you probably didn't need to know that.

Lovely haiku dear.