It reminds me of what my EX-boyfriend told me when he was trying to get me back. Other than that sad imaging, impressive!

~ SohoNights

great job :) it has such a natural flow. good song material!

You should be impressed with yourself. I hate false modesty, though I'm guilty of it at times, no doubt.

Your subject is classic, and your writing flowed with song quality. Did you get an "A"? You deserved one.

Keep writing,
McKinley