|Reviews for The Prerogatives of Fate|
| LolBookWorm 1/28/11 . chapter 26
Why'd you stop at such a cliffhanger? Please write more soon
| June's vampire 7/1/09 . chapter 5
I loved this chapter it made me really want to read the rest.
| artificial destiny 6/29/09 . chapter 3
aw. even though the chapters are short, you really give a lot of depth into each character
| artificial destiny 6/29/09 . chapter 1
nice intro! cant wait to read the rest :)
| benzene 5/30/09 . chapter 26
Despicable. I can't believe you left with a cliff hanger. It's been a while since your last update. Is this story on hiatus?
| clairey 4/16/09 . chapter 26
Really liking the story...update soon :D
| The Beauty of Lies 3/16/09 . chapter 26
loved it update soon plz P
| Maria 1/10/09 . chapter 26
Hurry up and update! This is a cool story! !
| Faith Adeline 12/31/08 . chapter 26
Good, except some of the diologue doesn't really flow. For one thing, he's been around for a while, so his diologue is going to be, while modern, a bit refined. A vampire probably wouldn't say, "This whole dating thing is new to me," at least not in that way. Also, when you state a name, such as, "Look, Layla," you need the comma. For anything that's supposed to be a name, even a pet name, you need that comma before it. That's about it. Keep it up :)
| AndItMovesUsAll 12/26/08 . chapter 26
I really liked it, buty now im dying to know what happens next!
| Silly-girl15 12/25/08 . chapter 26
I love this chapter. Conflict...
| lostlotus 12/24/08 . chapter 26
| freak4hitsugaya 12/23/08 . chapter 26
that was a really amazing chapter! please update soon! i have waited forever for this chapter!
| pinkeclipse 12/23/08 . chapter 26
she cant have kids with him?
| Sabreal 12/16/08 . chapter 25
Please update soon.
You have a faithful reader in me D