Why'd you stop at such a cliffhanger? Please write more soon

I loved this chapter it made me really want to read the rest.

aw. even though the chapters are short, you really give a lot of depth into each character

awsum :)

nice intro! cant wait to read the rest :)

Despicable. I can't believe you left with a cliff hanger. It's been a while since your last update. Is this story on hiatus?

Really liking the story...update soon :D

loved it update soon plz P

Hurry up and update! This is a cool story! !

Good, except some of the diologue doesn't really flow. For one thing, he's been around for a while, so his diologue is going to be, while modern, a bit refined. A vampire probably wouldn't say, "This whole dating thing is new to me," at least not in that way. Also, when you state a name, such as, "Look, Layla," you need the comma. For anything that's supposed to be a name, even a pet name, you need that comma before it. That's about it. Keep it up :)

Faith

I really liked it, buty now im dying to know what happens next!

I love this chapter. Conflict...

Intersting chapter

that was a really amazing chapter! please update soon! i have waited forever for this chapter!

she cant have kids with him?

Please update soon.

x

You have a faithful reader in me D