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The Twilight Hour
Twilight Starr
2008-07-04 . chapter 1
Great job at description. The last line is haunting. Nice work. Keep writing!
Good luck with writing, this story, and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.
~Twilight Starr~
Vampire Butter Beans
2008-04-26 . chapter 1
I like that one, very much. Nice touch, I see what you mean by how you can't add anymore without ruining it. I think it is fine the way it is.
Hope I can see more short stories, or maybe more in the future!
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