OMG i absolutly LOVE! this story. there are some things that have started to kinda irk me 1) the whole love/ hate thing between Hallow and Spark it's like "oh i love you today" and then "ugh i hate your guts get outta my face i never wanna see you again tomorrow" 2) Why is everything that Hallow do cause a long chain of contradictions that she has to face. I'd say all you have to do is mix it up a bit ya know throw in a couple twists here or there and then u have an enhanced story. Well thats all i have to say Keep Writing ~AW

I actualy had a feeling about Alex being some sort of angel really early on

The turn of events is very surprising and I am very glad that you made sure not to blame Carl for all of Hallow's wrong doings actions which made the story much more realistic in human emotions. I'm still slightly puzzled about Spark's actions, he just seems to detached. I always thought Alex was special, but I'm afraid I didn't manage to pick up any hints. Thanks and I'm looking forward to your next update.

great story! i remember reading part of it a bit back,
it's gotten so much better!

i kind of got that alex was a half angel. but i think there was an element of reverse psychology in that she kept insisting that carl was the half demon. witty ;D
thanks for writing, and please update soon!

lolz, i thought alex was the half demon in the begginnig but then i was like naw but, woah half angel hah sweet. Carl i suspected him in the middle of the story but what shocked me was his talent. bah i dont know how u come up with this stuff but its really good and the mystery thing! :D but you have to update son.

hmm i think the half demon murder is that guy *bah forgot his name* who works with Hallow!

ooh. Liking it already! Sounds good as well :D

Hi, new reader. I'm really loving this story and I can't wait for an update!

LOVE THE UPDATE(:
it was freakin good.
Even though Carl was bad, I love it how you made Hallow still feel that she had a connection for him. She cried even though he was controllnig her and all. It's good(:

Loved this update (: I definitely didn't know Alex was a nephilim. Great job!!

Faith

Ok, I have to admit It took me 2 times reading this. The first time I got to Alex being a half angel and I thought it had turned completely cheesy and stupid. THen this morning I finished it and I thought 'well hey! If there are half-demons, why not half-angels. I mean they do it on Charmed.'
SO I guess it was ok, I liked how she knocked Carl unconcious.

Wow, awesome chapter, I love Spark, can't wait for more!

great story!! please update again soon!

Dur, I fell silly for not getting any of your subtle hints at all, the only time I thought Alex was a half angel was when he appeared in this chapter...ten seconds before it was revealed anyway. ¬_¬ And Carl! Bah I only vaguely thought he was a half demon, but not seriously, I like your reasoning behind his power though, it gives Hallow a bit of the blame, bad little demon girl that she is. :D

Mwah! You rock, Soph. And no, I don't think I really gave much thought to Alex. At least I don't think I did. Did I? I don't know. But the point is, you rock. A lot. Verily. And all that.