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| SongoftheDarquePhoenix 2008-04-29 ch 1,  | abuseGrim but strangly real. |
| ShakespeareFan 2008-04-29 ch 1, anon. | abuseEven now, I'm threatened with tears... very very beautiful |
| Zapto369 -2- 2008-04-28 ch 1, | abuseThat will haunt my nightmares later. |
| Raetherandom 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseI love the slightly symbolic use of ring around the rosie at the end. This is a fabulous poem. Definently one of my favorites! |
| Crazy Tuberculosis Girl 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abuseI love this poem, very meaningful :D |
| Kaizykat 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI really like this, especially the repeating lines and the ending. |
| CrypticCorpse 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseV good! Loved it, great poem. |
| AKOiR DEFYiNG 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is... definately moving. It's well written, and it's... oddly enchanting. This is definately one of the best things I've read in regards to message. |