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| Kyrric 2008-07-23 ch 2,  | abuseYou don't even need to write a next chapter. These two are brilliant, just by themselves. It's short and sweet, and your sense of timing is amazing. There's already enough closure for the two of them, and it's enough to hope that things DO work out, rather than the complicated mess that would actually result. Even so, I do want to read more. Might want to invest in longer chapters, and your choice of words is awkward in places, but other than that, I have nothing to complain about. =] Update soon. x. K |
| H3ARTBROK3Nxx 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI must admit, you've got me hooked. Can't wait to read more =D |
| Dot Cubed 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseI'm so interested to see what the response is going to be! You've crafted a very intriguing story with just a little space, can't wait for the rest! |