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| Green Eyed Angel 2008-08-27 ch 4,  | abuseaww, i love that story. I added it to my favorites list. Who cares if it's slightly cliched, it's still a wonderful story. |
| Amaryllis Faye 2008-08-18 ch 4, | abusevery cute! |
| telepop 2008-08-18 ch 4, | abuseThat was so good, it made me feel sad and happy, hah. I offically love romance short stories. M it's like... brazilian chocolate. Cute. |
| telepop 2008-08-18 ch 2, | abuseJesus this is only 4 chapters!? BOO. |
| telepop 2008-08-18 ch 1, | abuseAt this second, well I had to wait like a long friggen minute to add to favourites and then to start this review but I'm not complaining... that much. Gawd, I just turned up my computer speakers, but I’m listening to my mp3... hah. But yeah at this minute I’m head over heels with this story, the characters and how it's funny yet simple and realistic. I'm quite interested in what happens next and impressed because you have no right-in-your-face errors. I hope that the chapters never end; it cheered me up immensely for an odd reason :) I also like that little touch that you added, the cutest sentence from the first chapter as the summary, very professionally done. AHA! The characters are totally likable, that’s why it’s so killer. Is that word still cool? |
| balloonfista 2008-07-30 ch 4, | abuseLove it! It's so cute! WRite more stories like this, please... Ri |
| alyssness 2008-07-05 ch 4, | abusethat was so sweet! -Lays |
| rainbow-oasis 2008-06-19 ch 4, | abuseYou know you said that chapter 3 was a bit boring etc etc? Well, I thought it was lovely. tbh, Evan sounds like the sweetest guy. And the last chapter was of course amazing! I love the two shapshots at the end - CUTE! (; thanks - rainbow-oasis |
| x3life 2008-05-23 ch 4, | abuseaw this was so cute!! i loved it =) |
| Evil lil angel 2008-05-17 ch 4, | abuseyay! happy ending! |
| Evil lil angel 2008-05-17 ch 3, | abuseso sahd! ive actually had one of those types of friendship things... me and the guy stopped talking all together in six months after he started dating the new girl at our school.. |
| Evil lil angel 2008-05-17 ch 2, | abuseo i think i see a romance in the making! |
| Evil lil angel 2008-05-17 ch 1, | abusethis is really cute:) |
| ihrtbks 2008-05-17 ch 4, | abuseThis really almost made me cry... It was so sweet, especially the picture thing at the end. YAY for Hayden and Raegan. I LOVED his "you're the one for me" speech. Can I have Evan, though? I love how he's so understanding! *FAVORITES* |
| d666lisa 2008-05-17 ch 4, | abuseExcellent story, cute without being too fluffy :) |