AGHH! it was really cute.
except i think you made a mistake when you wrote," Eight-year-old versions of me and my best friend stood there in front of our shed, grinning stupidly and holding hands as we looked at the camera."
In the other chapter you wrote that they wer eleven when they got the shed.
i still loved it though! :DD

This is a very cute story

That was absolutely adorable..you did an amazing job. I love your writing! :)

More!!

sweet.

I loved this one. :]] I think this short story is either my favorite or second favorite of all of yours. :D

Amazingly cute.

Very cute.

aww, i love that story. I added it to my favorites list. Who cares if it's slightly cliched, it's still a wonderful story.

very cute!

That was so good, it made me feel sad and happy, hah. I offically love romance short stories. M it's like... brazilian chocolate. Cute.

Jesus this is only 4 chapters!? BOO.

At this second, well I had to wait like a long friggen minute to add to favourites and then to start this review but I'm not complaining... that much. Gawd, I just turned up my computer speakers, but I’m listening to my mp3... hah. But yeah at this minute I’m head over heels with this story, the characters and how it's funny yet simple and realistic. I'm quite interested in what happens next and impressed because you have no right-in-your-face errors. I hope that the chapters never end; it cheered me up immensely for an odd reason :) I also like that little touch that you added, the cutest sentence from the first chapter as the summary, very professionally done. AHA! The characters are totally likable, that’s why it’s so killer. Is that word still cool?

Love it! It's so cute!

WRite more stories like this, please...

Ri

that was so sweet!
-Lays