Hm... It was an intersting concept for a story, a single oneshot about a bar and turtle doves... but I felt it was a tad confusing. Other than that, it was written well and there were no grammar mistakes that I saw. Nice job!
~Flamingflie

I like it. Plot-wise.
The way it was written seemed rushed though. Grammar's okay.
Still, it lacks some detail. At least, to me. Hee.
Just one reader's point of view.
Continue writing! ^^