 souseiki 2008-05-06 . chapter 1Very interesting... I love how metaphorical this is. To me, it's not a real forest- it's like a trek through the character's mind, or rather, the reader. Stories using second person narrative (that's how you call it, right?) are always a joy to read, when well-written like this one. :) Nice and slightly psychedelic on the edges. Great work! |