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Reviews For: Sake of Being Poignant
souseiki 2008-05-06 . chapter 1
Very interesting... I love how metaphorical this is. To me, it's not a real forest- it's like a trek through the character's mind, or rather, the reader. Stories using second person narrative (that's how you call it, right?) are always a joy to read, when well-written like this one. :) Nice and slightly psychedelic on the edges. Great work!
rassoodock 2008-05-05 . chapter 1
this almost reminds me of one of the choose your own adventure books by the tense it was in. your description was dreamy and sweet, which was grand to read after a long day at school. i hope your descirption is always this good.
Justine Greanbere 2008-04-26 . chapter 1
Two words: Simply beautiful.
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