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| eville 2008-04-29 ch 1,  | abusethe last line really finishes it. gorgeous imagery and use of the word 'breakaway' man. x |
| someone vague 2008-04-27 ch 1, | abusei like this man, i know you told me not to say something like that in the review but i do. the first half isn't that enticing, a bit choppy if you know what i mean, but i love the way the 2nd half makes up for it. "Since you've gone, this is not breathing" is the turning point for me i guess, from there on is just golden. |
| PocoSnow15 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseThat was beautiful. It was short but the emotion was so powerful and just amazing. The person in this reminds me of me. =) |