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Felinity
2008-08-12
ch 3,
abuseaww i love how cute they are together, they really are like a married couple :) love the story, keep it up ;)
Cosmic Sage
2008-07-10
ch 3,
abuseAw! That chapter was so sweet! It was almost sickeningly sweet, but you caught yourself and kept the story going at a decent pace so it didn’t get all mushy. I think that your ability to seamlessly go into many POVs is a gift-and-curse deal. The omniscient narrator is a great touch, but it sometimes makes the reader have to go back and rethink the perspective of the story.

Other than that, it was a great read and I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Feathery Fear
2008-07-10
ch 3,
abuseOkay that..thats so cool!I love this story a lot!^^
Even its a bit seems like Gravitation,ya know..a blonde and a redhead,smoking..*ehem* Anyway the plot isn't the same not even the seme uke position! XD

Since I'm kinda new here,this is the fifth stories I've read and hell yeah,I love it!>_~ The describtion,plot and I couldn't see where does this story goes,it gave me curiousity to read more!The ideas of the plot also quite tempting.. *smug* Oh just so you know how being an anime yaoi fangirls can pull me into this kind of stories ^^ Great job done by you!Please continue,onegai!
bee bee
2008-07-09
ch 3, anon.
abuseamazing!
best slash story i've read in a long long time.
very real and full of feeling with out being too much.
i can't wait till next time.
Howling Cat
2008-07-09
ch 3,
abuseAww! This is so adorable!

I love Will and Daniel and Norah and Monica and Matt...I just don't like Sean. He's being a jerk, but I hope he comes around. And the old lady is hilarious and very sweet. I like her too, haha.

Update soon!
Cosmic Sage
2008-05-06
ch 2,
abuseOH NO! I feel for poor William... Richard was so cold! That was so seriously uncalled for, that... urgh. Anyway... I'm glad that (most of) Daniel's friends are okay with him being gay (if only not for William). Amd I'm glad to see more of who William is and not who others think he is.

And in the (for the first time) appropriate words of Brittney Spears: GIMME GIMME MOAR!!
Ninjapocky
2008-05-05
ch 2,
abuseWonderful chapter =] I love your style of writing, don't see it too often.

Not really sure what else to say, other than I loved it.
gummybaby
2008-05-04
ch 2,
abuseaw poor will! The dynamic between daniel and him is great, you can just feel the love. (and now I have the lion king song stuck in my head...can you feel the love tonight?) lol.
ninjapocky
2008-04-28
ch 1, anon.
abuseDefinately love how this starts. And I would definately continue reading if you continue writing.
gummybaby
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseOh, please do continue it! You've got a lot of pontential here, and I'd love to see you develop this story further.
Cosmic Sage
2008-04-27
ch 1,
abuseHellz to the yes! I want to know more! Why's Daniel so cooly-cold?! Why's William all... Well... The way he is lol? It's really interesting! Keep it up!
Kimi504
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abuseYes, it's deffinately worth continuing
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