|Reviews for whisperlie|
| Nemonus 7/20/08 . chapter 1
Good! Slightly creepy ("walk not into the light...lovie m'love"), with a nice, quiet, contained or restrained rhythm that adds to the 'characterization'. You used combined words ("childloverfriend") well. The fifth chapter is a bit cliche, but otherwise I have no complaints about this. The fourth stanza is very nice, adds and interesting picture to it all...
| Bronzeage 4/26/08 . chapter 1
Tell me its true.