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| An Apple Bleeds At Twilight 2008-05-31 ch 1, | abuseLovely. I loved the last line: "...and now I can't be swayed." It sorta came to a slow, gradual end and then BANG. Its as if the book was shut and the writer is about to make those written plans real. Very beautiful and bittersweet. - An Apple Bleeds At Twilight |
| Shasta Valentine 2008-04-26 ch 1, | abuseinteresting. i wholely like this poem because i can tell this didnt take you long, and it was honest and from the heart. good job. -sv |