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Reviews For: Things I Wrote On Nov 11 2006

An Apple Bleeds At Twilight
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuseLovely. I loved the last line: "...and now I can't be swayed." It sorta came to a slow, gradual end and then BANG. Its as if the book was shut and the writer is about to make those written plans real. Very beautiful and bittersweet.

- An Apple Bleeds At Twilight
Shasta Valentine
2008-04-26
ch 1,
abuseinteresting.
i wholely like this poem because i can tell this didnt take you long,
and it was honest and from the heart.
good job.


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