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alicer
2008-04-28
ch 1,
abuseyour poetry always makes me want to ask you what it's about because i interpret it one way and i know i'm interpreting it completely off so i'm afraid to say anything...i mean, in this one, "mom" could be a metaphorical symbol representing...idk, some cult leader you used to know that you called "mom" but for me it just reminded me of my mother and how tired she is and how dead her dreams are because she's a MOTHER NOW. anyway i haven't read your poetry in awhile so i am doing so now and picking out ones i like and i like this one!
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