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| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-05-11 ch 1, | abusevery strong in a bitter kind of way. I wasn't sure what bandings is/are?? I don't think the rhymes always worked but at the beginning they were pretty powerful. Also I think there were a few typos here and there, maybe go through and check that. |