Reviews for A Tale About The Last Solider

Reviews For: A Tale About The Last Solider

Kiss.Today.Goodbye
2008-05-11
ch 1,

abusevery strong in a bitter kind of way.

I wasn't sure what bandings is/are??

I don't think the rhymes always worked but at the beginning they were pretty powerful.

Also I think there were a few typos here and there, maybe go through and check that.

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