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| Kiss.Today.Goodbye 2008-05-10 ch 1,  | abuseIn chorus 2 I think you meant "lose" not lost. It becomes quite repetitive towards the end, but that could just be a song technique. I enjoyed the second chorus as it was quite emotive. (review game) |