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nora-11
2008-05-08
ch 1,
abuseI liked your poem alot. I liked how you strated with one word and gradually increased the length of the lines. Its like as you keep on explaining the person, the bigger they become. I dont know if you intended that, but its how i found it ;p

I especially liked the last line =D
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