LMAO!! TEAM BLAKE!!

Honestly . . . i wasn't going to read the new story but after reading that i have to at least give it a try =P

this is such a good story I can't wait for more! btw boys are such turd idiots! lol

Hello!

Personally, I really like the way you've allowed us to see both sides of the story - literally - by writing sections from each of the leading characters' points of view. I really, really think that you should continue with this; however, I do think there is something missing from the Blake chapters - it just doesn't seem very real to me.

That having been said, I do think that you should continue with both perspectives. Keep Writing!

Dubhain Joyce

uh...i dunno
i like it
just write however works for you
if it's all Kayleigh and then later you need to write from Blake's POV to get a point across, you know, whatever.
but it's good, so try to keep writing!

I just started reading this last night and didn't want to stop. I really love it. As to whether or not to continue with Blake's point of view, I don't think it really matters all that much. I like having both their point of views, because it gives you some insight into what they are both thinking, especially Blake. I think you need to consider why you want to include Blake's point of view. The story up to this point could easily be told without it, but you'd be missing that insight. The only problem is that you'd have to make him redeem himself at the end of the story. I hope this helps some and don't worry, either way the story will still be great.

Love the story... its totally interesting
But as for you question I think you should keep writing from both point of views
update asap

i think you should try to do both. using only kaleigh can make the reader become more attached to a certain character (making them byist and not involved). you could start with more of kristoph trying to woo kaleigh and then move into blake's jealousy and kaleigh's familial conflict. i think you'll find that once you get moving you'll be able to become un-stuck with your writing. Hope this helped!!

Hii! I am an avid fan, but just discovered today... but I wish I had earlier. I LOVE this story, and I don't know why it doesn't have tons of reviews! It had me hooked pretty much right away, and now I'm itching for the next chapter.
I would love for you to keep Blake's point of view in this story. Without it, Blake seems to be a very shallow, flat character. With the Blake chapters in he really rounds out and comes to life. Great work so far, very easy to read.

i think you should do whatever you are most comfortable with.

oh that burns.
my parents got divorced.
it's totally the worst couple years of your life.
and then you realize that your childhood wasn't as good as you actually thought it was . . .
life was so much better when we were all too little to understand everything.

good story so far!

Hey!

I just want to say that I really enjoy reading all of your work - not just I May Be In Love With Spiderman but also Although You Are Biased, etc. The update emails from Fictionpress make my day. Keep writing and don't drown in overwork!

Dubhain Joyce

I really like your story, i hope you update soon :)

wow
AWESOME!
more?

oh
so sad
more please!?

Wow, this is awesome so far, I love it! You know just how to absorb the reader. Goodluck on further progress! *_*