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| labratv 2008-08-25 ch 18,  | abuseI love this. I really, truly love it. Ryan is so lovely to tease. How fun! I think you're doing a really excellent job with this story. The interactions between the characters are the best part. Looking forward to the nest chapter! -Amy |
| Benozir 2008-08-25 ch 18, | abusethat was a nice chapter keep it up . it was great. |
| XxAmanda Is A Jasper's Girl... 2008-08-23 ch 18, | abuseDude, awesome chapter. Daniel's pick up lines are funny! Lol. I kinda laughed when Ryan got slapped. I found it pretty funny. lol. The preview thing would be killer! --AMS |
| XxAmanda Is A Jasper's Girl... 2008-08-18 ch 17, | abuseAwesome Chapter. I love TALK DIRTY TO ME and I WANT ACTION TONIGHT by Poison, but that song was a decent one. Love WELCOME TO THE JUNGLE one of my faves by GnR. Please update soon! --AMS |
| benozir 2008-08-17 ch 17, anon. | abusethat was awesome!! . please continue writing. |
| darling81 2008-08-09 ch 16, | abuseI'm not much of a fan of their first original song but I really like the second one. Keep up the good work :) |
| blackoblivion13 2008-08-09 ch 16, | abuseTHAT'S NOT FAIR! T_T T_T THEY TOTALLY SHOULD HAVE WON! GRR!! |
| XxAmanda Is A Jasper's Girl... 2008-08-09 ch 16, | abuseThat was awesome. I love the lyric: Shed away your pride for me I promise to be worthy of you because it just reminded me of some of the things that I've done in a relationship and all how one of my boyfriends was too engrossed in becoming "popular" that he didn't care for me. I know-weird resoning, but I'm weird. lol. Tight chapter! Update soon please! --AMS |
| benozir 2008-08-06 ch 15, anon. | abusethat chapter was so great it was awesome!! please continue writing. |
| Essie 2008-08-03 ch 15, anon. | abuseI love this story. I like the interplay between past and present. I like the characters. I like the fact that you write because you want to and not just for reviews ... to tell you the truth you should probably have 14 more reviews than you do but unfortunately i am more a closet reader. heheheheh keep going anyway pls! |
| XxAmanda Is A Jasper's Girl... 2008-08-02 ch 15, | abuseGreat chapter. Please update soon --AMS |
| XxAmanda Is A Jasper's Girl... 2008-07-27 ch 14, | abuseWonderful chapter. I liked the first song. it was beautifully written. |
| Th3 UnKnowN 2008-07-22 ch 13, | abusehey i vote rachael bilson for louise great story btw |
| XxAmanda Is A Jasper's Girl... 2008-07-20 ch 13, | abuseMost faithful reviewer ever? Wow, that's a great honor. Lol, being sencere here. Anyway, a piercing? lol, sweet. I think i could see him having a pierced ear. At least it wasnt the right ear. that would've been funny, but uncool cuz he would've been made fun of... Lol, Daniel's scarred by the amt. of blood there was? I would've been too. Poor kid. Update soon, please. -AMS |
| KiraLove 2008-07-13 ch 12, | abusePoor Ryan in the bathroom... I feel for him --Kira Love |