God... that was... just, wow. I'm speechless and I just am too impressed for words, if that's possible. I never have thought of the shy guy/ extroverted girl cliche, and it's just so refreshing. And the musician part, unlike other stories, it seemed real. It seemed so real, I could actually relate to it. The feelings, the people, the songs, the scenes. It all could be fit together perfectly like a jigsaw puzzle to get an awesome picture. You created an artwork so beautiful, so wonderful, it can inspire people. I used to be an introvert and I would love to become a rockstar one day, so this story was an inspiration, and provoked many feelings in me. So I hope you get this published (even though I'd probably die if you took it down and I wouldn't be able to buy it in my country) and take care. This has been a rewarding read, and even though I finished this story in around three days, I'll be back to reread it, and I might review again. Oh, and I can't find anything you can improve on, and no grammar mistakes. Only thing is, the last song is a bit too cheesy, but then again, it fits the occasion.

Love, and take care.

WOW. This story is completely and utterly beautiful! I can't even imagine putting how much I absolutely love this story into words. This will definitely be a story to remember for a lifetime. Are you thinking of getting this story published? It would definitely make it. I'd be the first to buy it! I don't know...this story just make me so emotional. I just love Ryan's character wholeheartedly. Daniel and Scott are adorable and I love them as well. Come to think of it, I just love this story completely and I am in love with everything about it! I seriously read it all in one sitting. This is definitely the best I've read on Fictionpress, and I've read quite a lot. This story really touches my heart, and it's something I can relate to. I hope you continue your dream of writing forever, and when you are published, you will be a great hit! I AM YOUR #1 FAN!
-dontneedyou

Amazing story. Good work! I loved reading it.

Nice. I will read some more.

hey so i favourited EWR a long long time ago but i didnt start reading it until well yesterday ahahahh i wasnt sure how good it would be considering how many reviews you got but then i decided to continue reading and i just fell in love with the characters you made. I love how the boys are so immature and loyal and how everyone loves teasing ryan. to be honest i just like everything in EWR ahahaha. right now its 3 in the morning where im at and i sort of have class tomorrow but the lack of sleep to me right now is worth it ahahah. i especially liked the humor of the story. well i dont really have much else to say except thank you for writing this story and sharing it? ahahah anyway i hope you write more good ones to come =]

Wow! You're absolutely right- this does not feel like 'one of those' stories. Not that there's anything wrong with them so long as they're written well. =D

What I mostly enjoy of this fic is the characterisation, particularly Ryan. I like that you made Ryan's character so without him having a dark past. Sure his father works and hardly sees him but they're on good terms. His mother is awesome. I loved picturing a shy little boy throughout the story.

I like that you made your characters human- Louise, she made me so pissed off by her insecurity with Kinley and Ryan, I wanted to reach through the screen and slap some sense into her. Her actions were not blown out of proportion and actually seemed justified in an annoying way. =D

So I'd like to say, thank you for taking the time to write and post such an excellent story! I liked experiencing the journey of transformation and development of the characters. Congratulations on a job well done and on your award! It's well-deserved! I think next time Ryan should be nominated as best main character portrayal. =D

Keep up the good work!

gulistanlik

What on earth does Louise think she's doing?! What and idiot!

omg! this story was really romantic :)
i loved it! ryans character was
really interesting, made it even more
fun too read.

never stop writing! :P

... the last time:
I loved this story from the first to the last word.

It's just Louise that she's the one who will come and "reunite" the couple~
and yes, I loved it as well that Daniel and Lilly never made it to couple status in this story. It would have been a bit of an overkill.
I also liked that Ryan never gave any answer to the question of whether he got the girl.

I believe this story has been real fresh and different compared to the other romances on FP. Many on here are so cliché and overplayed. Yours was just more real. I mean, it's not always that the shy girl likes the arrogant/jock guy, and not all girls act bitchy and immature over guys (regarding Kinley & Lo. LOL, the girls in the bathroom are another story), which you greatly demonstrated in this story. So reading thisromance was really interesting.

I'm gonna miss your characters! Obviously Ryan the most, he's such a cutie. You did a fantawesome job on the characters, the story, ALL the songs, and everything else I missed. (:

So thank you for the wonderful, amazing, and "fantawesome" (lol) story! I hope you continue writing, and good luck with your other projects! Oh yes, and that more people find and read your stories!

P.S. I Forgot (:

OMG! I can't believe it! The future bit of this chapter scared me. I thought someone died!! What with the hospital scene and tears...! I bet you intentionally tried to scare your readers! Lol, I kid. But if you did, congrats. It worked.
And LOL, at the part with Lily and the "war wife". Haha, Lily's so cool (:
I'd feel bad for the label record being a bust, but it was pretty obvious since it was mentioned in another chapter that it took long for them to sign.
And yes, the prom scene with the beautiful serenading was definitely

Darn the label record people! And Ryan planned to say I love you to Lo on that day. Hopefully they'll all make it on time! I can't wait to read Ryan's reaction if Lo wears a red dress.
I'm so sad, there's only two chapters left!

Amazing chapter!
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Ah, yes. Us girls can be very vicious. I feel bad for Louise, good thing Ryan cheered her up. He's such a cutie!
I really love how they're having more together time, or as Dandy and Cooties call it, their honeymoon (x But what's sad is that after everything, they might have to leave each other. Hopefully they won't!

Awesome chapter, and I can't wait for the Prom scene ...!
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Aww, poor Ryan. That guitar was such a big part of him and who he is. It's a good thing he has such great friends and girlfriend to try and get him a new one.
I really liked the last bit with Ryan and Lo really opening up with each other. They are just so sweet!

Amazing chapter.
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Ryan's guitar!?? That's like his entire life! Well, plus Louise. Aww, I feel bad for him. He got rejected from a college he never even applied for himself, he (Dandy, and Cooties) didn't get a reply from any record labels, and then his broken guitar. A sad, sad day. Hopefully everything will turn out okay. Well of course the record label will, because they obviously get famous. And maybe he'll get a new guitar.

Awesome chapter! But you know what I hate? Not your story, that for sure (: But that parents are really annoying! My mom wants me to go to bed, and I've only read two! I'd try pretending that I'm sleeping, but she'll catch me. Wow, it's sad; I'm fifteen, it's summer, and my parents still care about what time I go to bed. What kind of strange world do we live in??

Again, awesome chapter!I'll DEFINITELY continue reading right after I wake up!
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