Haha, this is sort of optimistic, but in that "omgwtf Did she just suggest genocide" kind of way.

You don't see much of that! Good poem. I really like the message and the way it flows.

this has a dictator approach to it, the idea of a distopia or something along those lines. it reminds me of hitler, actually, the way he rebuilt germany then killed everyone in it. it was different than your other piece i read while still retaining your style. style is important to a writer and be thankful that you have found yours, but don't forget to continue to work on it as you age and improve your writing.

Striking. It's sort of a mockery of the unattainable promises leaders give to their people. I like how they're promising such happiness, but with a dark undertone of violence towards anyone how refuses hidden within it. Ah, great job.